My favorite food

OUTLINE
I/Introduction paragraph
Topic:the smell and the way to cook fried chicken
Thesis statement: And now,i will tell you how it's delicious and the way to cook it.
II/Body paragraph
1.Paragraph 1
Topic sentence:If you have a chance, try eating to know how it's deliciuos.
Smell: it smells of garlic, chilly and oil.
It looks very atractive with yellow chicken pieces.
It's very odorous.
Taste:It's verry crunch and a bit of salty.
Conclusion sentence: If you don't try eating it, you will never know how it's wonderful.
2.Paragraph 2
Topic sentence: Fried chicken is very delicious but you don't think that cooking it is difficult. In fact, it's very easy.
First: wash chicken and cut into small pieces and chop garlic.
Second: put chicken, garlic, a little of chilly, some sugar and a little of fish sauce. Then mix them togethe so that fish sauce can absord in chicken.
Final: put the pan on the cooker and heat oil. Then put pieces of chicken in pan and fry them untill they become yellow.
Conclusion sentence:The way to cook it isn't difficult
III/Conclusion paragraph
Cooking fried chicken doesn't take a lot of time because it's very very easy. Moreover, fried chicken is very very deliciuos and wonderful. So why do you try cooking and enyoying it?