Most people have their own idol. That can be an actor, an actress, a singer or someone succeed in their job. But for me, the person whom I admire at is my old-classmate. Her name’s Diem. I admire at her lifestyle. It has some points similar to me and some different points.
Both Diem and I are stubborn students. For example, we usually debate violently to protect our idea, although sometimes our idea is wrong. Also we don’t like doing anything according to any model. With the same lesson, all students in my class present it the same way as my teacher. But Diem and I present it in the other way. We don’t like intimating. Those are general points of Diem and me.
Besides the same points, we have some different points which I admire at her. She is a kind of extroversive person. She likes meeting people and making friends with somebody. She knows the way to make her feel comfortable and adjust her feelings. So her life is always in a balance state. Unlike her, I’m an introversive person. I usually hide my feelings in my heart. I don’t like to share them with anyone. So I always feel stress and uncomfortable. Also, I don’t like where there are a lot of people. One more thing, I admire at her optimistic sense. She always has belief in life though life has a lot of difficulties and hardship. Her attitude is “tomorrow everything will be ok.” On the other hand, sometimes I lose belief in life. I occasionally live without purpose. I sometimes think that life is worse and worse now that the difficulties which I have to face. I’m trying to learn her attitude as well as her lifestyle which I think they’re good for me.
I haven’t seen Diem for a long time – about one and a half year. May be, with her lifestyle, she is still stubborn and optimistic as before. She will be one of people I admire forever. And the different points in lifestyle make me admire her while the same points make us differ from everyone.
Thứ Bảy, 12 tháng 12, 2009
Thứ Sáu, 27 tháng 11, 2009
STUDENTS' LOVE
Students’ life is full memories and colors life. So a friend is very necessary for us to share pleasures, sadness in life. But sometimes, we need a “special friend” not only with meaning “friend”. I want to mention to “lover” and “students’ love”. Of course, that’s a real love. I think that students are person who can control their feelings as well as their life. So students’ love should be accepted.
Love supports us in study and in life. Whenever, we encounter difficult problems, our lover will share to us. They will encourage us overcome those difficulties and find the way to solve them. Our life will be more beautiful and happier when we have a person always next to us in any situation, anytime and anywhere. Also, we set up plans for the future together and we strive to achieve those goals. One more thing, we don’t feel lonely when we have to live far from our family. But some one says that “love will rule our study”. It means that the result of our study will go down when we love someone. I don’t think so, if we really love together, we will know the way to adjust between love and study. Love will make our study become better and our life more beautiful.
Maybe, the real love in students’ life is the best beautiful love. It’s really helpful in our life , our study. It not only supports us in life but also makes us love this life much more. Therfore, i think that there is no reason to say that “students shouldn’t love”.
Love supports us in study and in life. Whenever, we encounter difficult problems, our lover will share to us. They will encourage us overcome those difficulties and find the way to solve them. Our life will be more beautiful and happier when we have a person always next to us in any situation, anytime and anywhere. Also, we set up plans for the future together and we strive to achieve those goals. One more thing, we don’t feel lonely when we have to live far from our family. But some one says that “love will rule our study”. It means that the result of our study will go down when we love someone. I don’t think so, if we really love together, we will know the way to adjust between love and study. Love will make our study become better and our life more beautiful.
Maybe, the real love in students’ life is the best beautiful love. It’s really helpful in our life , our study. It not only supports us in life but also makes us love this life much more. Therfore, i think that there is no reason to say that “students shouldn’t love”.
STUDENTS' LOVE
OUT LINE
I/ Introductory paragraph
Hook: students’ life is full memories and colors life.
Background information: students are person who can control their feelings as well as their life.
Thesis statement: students’ love should be accepted.
II/ Body paragraph
Topic sentence: Love supports us in study and in life.
Reasons / examples:
• our lover will share difficulty problems to us.
• Encourage us overcome those difficulties and find the way to solve.
• Life will be more beautiful and happier.
• Set up plans together for the future and strive to achieve those goals.
Couter-argument: love will rule our study.
Refutation: if we really love together, we will know the way to adjust between love and study.
III/ Conclusion paragraph
Maybe, the real love in students’ life is the best beautiful love. It’s really helpful in our life , our study. It not only supports us in life but also makes us love this life much more. Therfore, i think that there is no reason to say that “students shouldn’t love”.
I/ Introductory paragraph
Hook: students’ life is full memories and colors life.
Background information: students are person who can control their feelings as well as their life.
Thesis statement: students’ love should be accepted.
II/ Body paragraph
Topic sentence: Love supports us in study and in life.
Reasons / examples:
• our lover will share difficulty problems to us.
• Encourage us overcome those difficulties and find the way to solve.
• Life will be more beautiful and happier.
• Set up plans together for the future and strive to achieve those goals.
Couter-argument: love will rule our study.
Refutation: if we really love together, we will know the way to adjust between love and study.
III/ Conclusion paragraph
Maybe, the real love in students’ life is the best beautiful love. It’s really helpful in our life , our study. It not only supports us in life but also makes us love this life much more. Therfore, i think that there is no reason to say that “students shouldn’t love”.
Thứ Bảy, 21 tháng 11, 2009
THE PADDY FIELD IN SUNRISE!
My hometown is a delta region with immense paddy fields. If you have a chance visting my hometown when the paddy fields are going to harvest. I’m sure that you will be enjoyed wonderful sights. And the best beautiful view is the paddy field front of my house in sunrise.
About 6 a.p, the sun has just wake up after a long night with a lot of beautiful dreams. The sky wears a blue dress. Some white clouds with many other shapes are flying slowly.The air’s very fresh. Every wind blows across bringing smell of ripening rice.In the distance, block of white birds are flying to find food. On the bamboo hedges next to the field, the crowd of birds are singing twitter.The overloaded spikes fall at one side. The slight winds only make them swing gently. The first sunshines make dew crops stagnating on leaves become sparkling like as small diamonds. And the big, round, yellow grain of rices are more glitter.The yellow covers everywhere on field. Overthere, some farmers visit their field. They stood to look every spike. May be, they are very happy and satisfied with their labour result.
Now i’m living in HCM city. But i always remember my hommetown. Specially, the days when my all vilage are going to harvest paddy. Every morning, i stand up in front of the paddy field, looking around and enjoying the fresh air. It’s really wonderful to begin a new day.
About 6 a.p, the sun has just wake up after a long night with a lot of beautiful dreams. The sky wears a blue dress. Some white clouds with many other shapes are flying slowly.The air’s very fresh. Every wind blows across bringing smell of ripening rice.In the distance, block of white birds are flying to find food. On the bamboo hedges next to the field, the crowd of birds are singing twitter.The overloaded spikes fall at one side. The slight winds only make them swing gently. The first sunshines make dew crops stagnating on leaves become sparkling like as small diamonds. And the big, round, yellow grain of rices are more glitter.The yellow covers everywhere on field. Overthere, some farmers visit their field. They stood to look every spike. May be, they are very happy and satisfied with their labour result.
Now i’m living in HCM city. But i always remember my hommetown. Specially, the days when my all vilage are going to harvest paddy. Every morning, i stand up in front of the paddy field, looking around and enjoying the fresh air. It’s really wonderful to begin a new day.
THE PADDY FIELD IN SUNRISE!
OUTLINE
I/ Introductory paragraph
Hook: My hometown is a delta region with immense paddy fields.
Background information: if you have a chance visting my hometown when the paddy fields are going to harvest. I’m sure that you will be enjoyed wonderful sights.
Thesis statement: The best beautiful view is the paddy field front of my house in sunrise.
II/ Body paragraph
The sun has just wake up.
The sky wears a blue dress. Some white clouds with many other shapes are flyingslowly.
The air’s very fresh. Every wind blows across bringing smell of ripening rice.
In the distance, block of white birds are flying to find food.
On the bamboo hedges next to the field, the crowd of birds are singing twitter.
The overloaded spikes fall at one side. The slight winds only make them swing gently.
The first sunshines make dew crops stagnating on leaves become sparkling like as small diamonds.
And the big, round, yellow grain of rices are more glitter.
The yellow covers everywhere on field.
Overthere, some farmers visit their field. They stood to look every spike.
III/ Conclusion paragraph
Now i’m living in HCM city. But i always remember my hommetown. Specially, the days when my all vilage are going to harvest paddy. Every morning, i stand up in front of the paddy field, looking around and enjoying the fresh air. It’s really wonderful to begin a new day.
I/ Introductory paragraph
Hook: My hometown is a delta region with immense paddy fields.
Background information: if you have a chance visting my hometown when the paddy fields are going to harvest. I’m sure that you will be enjoyed wonderful sights.
Thesis statement: The best beautiful view is the paddy field front of my house in sunrise.
II/ Body paragraph
The sun has just wake up.
The sky wears a blue dress. Some white clouds with many other shapes are flyingslowly.
The air’s very fresh. Every wind blows across bringing smell of ripening rice.
In the distance, block of white birds are flying to find food.
On the bamboo hedges next to the field, the crowd of birds are singing twitter.
The overloaded spikes fall at one side. The slight winds only make them swing gently.
The first sunshines make dew crops stagnating on leaves become sparkling like as small diamonds.
And the big, round, yellow grain of rices are more glitter.
The yellow covers everywhere on field.
Overthere, some farmers visit their field. They stood to look every spike.
III/ Conclusion paragraph
Now i’m living in HCM city. But i always remember my hommetown. Specially, the days when my all vilage are going to harvest paddy. Every morning, i stand up in front of the paddy field, looking around and enjoying the fresh air. It’s really wonderful to begin a new day.
AN UNFORGETABLE MEMORY!
That was on holiday, when i was about ten years old. My family visited my grandparents. Behind my grandparents’ house was a small canal where my cousins usually swam at there every afternoon. So that day, my cousin invited me to swim. And I had an unforgetable memory at that canal.
Although I didn’t know swimming, but when she invited me to swim, i was very eager and i agreed her innvitation right now. At first, she knew swimming so she swam quite far about middle of canal. But i only stood up near to the edge where waterlevel was equal with my belly. I felt very excited then i wanted to go further. Suddendly, i slipped and fell down a very deep place. I kept going up and down in water. My hands and legs waved continuosly. At that time, i tried to rise to the surface. My sister didn’t know that i didn’t know swimming. She thought that i was kidding. But i more and more went down. It was very difficult to breathe. I nearly became unconscious. I was so scared.After that, i didn’t know how i could lie on the ground. When I vomitted all water in my belly and came to life, i saw my all family there. My mother and my sister were crying. My mother clasped me in her hands and said :”my daughter”. My father rubbed my head and said that “ Don’t risk like this in next time”. I only whispered “ i’m really sorry everyone”. And i cried very much. Afterwards, my mother told that My father saw me when i was going to sink down and he dove into canal to save my life. It was very lucky to me.
Up to now i haven’t still known swimming because I can’t forget what happened to me on that holiday. Whenever i see canals or rivers, i recall that terrible afternoon. It was really an unforgetable memory for me. I alsolearn my lesson : shouldn’t risk in life as sometimes i have to lose my life.
Although I didn’t know swimming, but when she invited me to swim, i was very eager and i agreed her innvitation right now. At first, she knew swimming so she swam quite far about middle of canal. But i only stood up near to the edge where waterlevel was equal with my belly. I felt very excited then i wanted to go further. Suddendly, i slipped and fell down a very deep place. I kept going up and down in water. My hands and legs waved continuosly. At that time, i tried to rise to the surface. My sister didn’t know that i didn’t know swimming. She thought that i was kidding. But i more and more went down. It was very difficult to breathe. I nearly became unconscious. I was so scared.After that, i didn’t know how i could lie on the ground. When I vomitted all water in my belly and came to life, i saw my all family there. My mother and my sister were crying. My mother clasped me in her hands and said :”my daughter”. My father rubbed my head and said that “ Don’t risk like this in next time”. I only whispered “ i’m really sorry everyone”. And i cried very much. Afterwards, my mother told that My father saw me when i was going to sink down and he dove into canal to save my life. It was very lucky to me.
Up to now i haven’t still known swimming because I can’t forget what happened to me on that holiday. Whenever i see canals or rivers, i recall that terrible afternoon. It was really an unforgetable memory for me. I alsolearn my lesson : shouldn’t risk in life as sometimes i have to lose my life.
AN UNFORGETABLE MEMORY!
OUTLINE
I/ Introductory paragraph
Hook: That was on holiday, when i was about ten years old.
Background information: My family visited my grandparents. Behind my grandparents’ house was a small canal. My cousin invited me to swim.
Thesis statement: I had an unforgetable memory at that canal.
II/ Body paragraph
- I didn’t know swimming, but i agreed her innvitation right now.
- At first, she knew swimming so she swam quite far about middle of canal. I only stood up near to the edge where waterlevel was equal with my belly.
- Then i wanted to go further.
- Suddendly, i slipped and fell down a very deep place. I kept going up and down in water.
- At that time, i tried to rise to the surface. My sister didn’t know that i didn’t know swimming. She thought that i was kidding.
- I more and more went down. It was very difficult to breathe. I nearly became unconscious. I was so scared.
- After that, i didn’t know how i could lie on the ground.
- My father saw me when i was going to sink down and he dove into canal to save my life.
III/ Conclusion paragraph
I can’t forget what happened to me on that holiday. It was really an unforgetable memory. I learn my lesson : shouldn’t risk in life as sometimes i have to lose my life.
I/ Introductory paragraph
Hook: That was on holiday, when i was about ten years old.
Background information: My family visited my grandparents. Behind my grandparents’ house was a small canal. My cousin invited me to swim.
Thesis statement: I had an unforgetable memory at that canal.
II/ Body paragraph
- I didn’t know swimming, but i agreed her innvitation right now.
- At first, she knew swimming so she swam quite far about middle of canal. I only stood up near to the edge where waterlevel was equal with my belly.
- Then i wanted to go further.
- Suddendly, i slipped and fell down a very deep place. I kept going up and down in water.
- At that time, i tried to rise to the surface. My sister didn’t know that i didn’t know swimming. She thought that i was kidding.
- I more and more went down. It was very difficult to breathe. I nearly became unconscious. I was so scared.
- After that, i didn’t know how i could lie on the ground.
- My father saw me when i was going to sink down and he dove into canal to save my life.
III/ Conclusion paragraph
I can’t forget what happened to me on that holiday. It was really an unforgetable memory. I learn my lesson : shouldn’t risk in life as sometimes i have to lose my life.
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