AN UNFORGETABLE MEMORY!

OUTLINE
I/ Introductory paragraph
Hook: That was on holiday, when i was about ten years old.
Background information: My family visited my grandparents. Behind my grandparents’ house was a small canal. My cousin invited me to swim.
Thesis statement: I had an unforgetable memory at that canal.
II/ Body paragraph
- I didn’t know swimming, but i agreed her innvitation right now.
- At first, she knew swimming so she swam quite far about middle of canal. I only stood up near to the edge where waterlevel was equal with my belly.
- Then i wanted to go further.
- Suddendly, i slipped and fell down a very deep place. I kept going up and down in water.
- At that time, i tried to rise to the surface. My sister didn’t know that i didn’t know swimming. She thought that i was kidding.
- I more and more went down. It was very difficult to breathe. I nearly became unconscious. I was so scared.
- After that, i didn’t know how i could lie on the ground.
- My father saw me when i was going to sink down and he dove into canal to save my life.
III/ Conclusion paragraph
I can’t forget what happened to me on that holiday. It was really an unforgetable memory. I learn my lesson : shouldn’t risk in life as sometimes i have to lose my life.