THE PADDY FIELD IN SUNRISE!

OUTLINE
I/ Introductory paragraph
Hook: My hometown is a delta region with immense paddy fields.
Background information: if you have a chance visting my hometown when the paddy fields are going to harvest. I’m sure that you will be enjoyed wonderful sights.
Thesis statement: The best beautiful view is the paddy field front of my house in sunrise.
II/ Body paragraph
The sun has just wake up.
The sky wears a blue dress. Some white clouds with many other shapes are flyingslowly.
The air’s very fresh. Every wind blows across bringing smell of ripening rice.
In the distance, block of white birds are flying to find food.
On the bamboo hedges next to the field, the crowd of birds are singing twitter.
The overloaded spikes fall at one side. The slight winds only make them swing gently.
The first sunshines make dew crops stagnating on leaves become sparkling like as small diamonds.
And the big, round, yellow grain of rices are more glitter.
The yellow covers everywhere on field.
Overthere, some farmers visit their field. They stood to look every spike.
III/ Conclusion paragraph
Now i’m living in HCM city. But i always remember my hommetown. Specially, the days when my all vilage are going to harvest paddy. Every morning, i stand up in front of the paddy field, looking around and enjoying the fresh air. It’s really wonderful to begin a new day.