Thứ Sáu, 27 tháng 11, 2009

STUDENTS' LOVE

Students’ life is full memories and colors life. So a friend is very necessary for us to share pleasures, sadness in life. But sometimes, we need a “special friend” not only with meaning “friend”. I want to mention to “lover” and “students’ love”. Of course, that’s a real love. I think that students are person who can control their feelings as well as their life. So students’ love should be accepted.
Love supports us in study and in life. Whenever, we encounter difficult problems, our lover will share to us. They will encourage us overcome those difficulties and find the way to solve them. Our life will be more beautiful and happier when we have a person always next to us in any situation, anytime and anywhere. Also, we set up plans for the future together and we strive to achieve those goals. One more thing, we don’t feel lonely when we have to live far from our family. But some one says that “love will rule our study”. It means that the result of our study will go down when we love someone. I don’t think so, if we really love together, we will know the way to adjust between love and study. Love will make our study become better and our life more beautiful.
Maybe, the real love in students’ life is the best beautiful love. It’s really helpful in our life , our study. It not only supports us in life but also makes us love this life much more. Therfore, i think that there is no reason to say that “students shouldn’t love”.

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  1. Your idea is good but I think you should add more supporting ideas and examples to convince the reader
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  2. INTRODUCTION (2ms)
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    - Thesis statement 1
    BODY (4.5ms)
    - Good ideas 1
    - Coherence, unity, development 2
    - Language: Grammar, vocabulary (1)
    CONCLUSION (2ms)
    - Summarize (1)
    - Lesson, suggestions (1)
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